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Thursday, May 16, 2019

Up Skilling our sentences

ORIGINAL SENTENCE:

The stalls were filled with items


IMPROVED SENTENCE:
Lacking customers, the small shops were abundantly packed with sticky lollies until the first few customers eventually arrived.

W.A.L.T make a more complex sentence. my favorite part was  adding in more adjectives.











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